Immersed in verse
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In the poem, he compares himself with his forefathers. As rural folk, his father and his grandfather both worked with a spade, digging for food and fuel. In contrast, he wields a pen; instead of digging into the soil, he digs into his past, and works with that.
I suppose you'll want to read it now...
Digging
(1966)
By Seamus Heaney, from 'Death of a Naturalist'
Between my finger and my thumb
The squat pen rests; as snug as a gun.
Under my window a clean rasping sound
When the spade sinks into gravelly ground:
My father, digging. I look down
Till his straining rump among the flowerbeds
Bends low, comes up twenty years away
Stooping in rhythm through potato drills
Where he was digging.
The coarse boot nestled on the lug, the shaft
Against the inside knee was levered firmly.
He rooted out tall tops, buried the bright edge deep
To scatter new potatoes that we picked
Loving their cool hardness in our hands.
By God, the old man could handle a spade;
Just like his old man.
My grandfather could cut more turf in a day
Than any other man on Toner's bog.
Once I carried him milk in a bottle
Corked sloppily with paper. He straightened up
To drink it, then fell to right away
Nicking and slicing neatly, heaving sods
Over his shoulder, digging down and down
For the good turf. Digging.
The cold smell of potato mould, the squelch and slap
Of soggy peat, the curt cuts of an edge
Through living roots awaken in my head.
But I've no spade to follow men like them.
Between my finger and my thumb
The squat pen rests.
I'll dig with it.
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How'd you like that? Anyway, after an hour of listening to poetic words swooshing over my head, I was feeling pretty inspired myself, and came up with a poem on my way home. It's not going to look too good next to Mr Heaney's poem, but you'll have to forgive the fact that I'm not a Nobel laureate. Yet... (Fingers crossed!)
Waiting
(2006)
By Aureala
In the hazy grey of evening,
Awash with spectres of my past,
I stood at the bus-stop –
Waiting for the No. 8
Waiting to be saved.
Another bus stopped across the way
And in it, a man – dead!
His eyes, open wide,
Gazing towards infinity;
His face, glistening palely
Under neon lights;
His body, reclining in its leather seat,
A mere waxwork.
A lifeless effigy, a caricature of existence –
But still beautiful in death.
No, no – not dead! Reason declared,
And Sentiment desperately agreed:
He is merely in repose;
His eyes are glazed as he daydreams
Of the girl he is soon to meet,
Or simply muses about a hot meal and a soft bed
To sleep off the worries of a long day.
Thus my eyes and mind did disagree,
Till presently the bus pulled out
Going the way down which I'd come
And taking the ghostly man with it.
In the hazy grey of evening,
Awash with spectres of my past,
I stood at the bus-stop –
Praying for the No. 8
Praying to be saved.
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Well, that was today's literary contribution. Feel free to write your own!
7 Comments:
At Thursday, March 09, 2006 7:55:00 am,
Anonymous said…
Yes, a limo for the marylin hair sounds good to me! or maybe a Jag or something....
good poem I say! (yours!) I think if I were to attempt a poem, it would be one of those Japanese ones that's like 7, 5, 10 syllables. something like that. you gotta help me remember what that's called!
At Thursday, March 09, 2006 11:53:00 am,
Aureala said…
You mean a haiku? They're the short, sweet poems with 5 syllables in the first and third lines, and 7 syllables in the second. And they're only three lines long, which means that unlike an epic ballad, you don't have to write reams and reams of rhymes.
Heck, a haiku doesn't even have to rhyme.
But you're not allowed to be waffly. Here's a good one I heard from somewhere:
To express oneself
In seventeen syllables
Is very diffic
...Indeed. Anyway, I'm glad you liked my (non-haiku) poem!
At Thursday, March 09, 2006 1:01:00 pm,
Anonymous said…
Haiku! ah, thank you. I saw "That 70's show" pulled some good gags with haiku's a while ago. Alas my brain is just not the type to think these things out, esp in it's sad sorry state at the moment. Maybe when I finish writing, my brain will be set free for fun stuff!
At Thursday, March 09, 2006 1:08:00 pm,
Anonymous said…
I lie! my brain is not all useless!
I do not know why
I cannot get my thesis
completed in time
:oD my first poem in year! that doesn't spell out a word with the first letter of each line! hehe!
At Tuesday, March 14, 2006 5:07:00 am,
Anonymous said…
One of my favourites is like a haiku, although the syllables don't really fit the standard pattern. It goes:
The dragonfly -
It's head is almost
Only eye!
Short but sweet. And undeniably true.
At Thursday, March 16, 2006 3:12:00 am,
Anonymous said…
I have none of my own, but the following is lovely...
When I am an old woman I shall wear purple,
With a red hat which doesn't go and doesn't suit me,
And I shall spend my pension on brandy and summer gloves,
And satin sandals, and say we've no money for butter.
I shall sit down on the pavement when I'm tired.
And gobble up samples in shops and press alarm bells ,
And run my stick along public railings,
And make up for the sobriety of my youth.
I shall go out in my slippers in the rain,
And pick flowers in other people's gardens,
And learn to spit...
But, maybe I ought to practice a little now?
So people who know me are not too shocked or surprised when suddenly I am old and start to wear purple.
- Jenny Joseph
At Thursday, March 16, 2006 10:30:00 am,
Aureala said…
For succinct haikus
And verse on freeing oneself -
I must say thank you!
Seriously, guys - I really appreciate your lovely poems! : )
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